some people say that the major environmental problem in our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems.
discuss both views and give your opinion.
Industrialization laid the foundation for our sophisticated lifestyle and have made the world a better place for humans, however, the devious environment impacts it caused should never be neglected. Such effects on enviroment made the countries and its people really concerned, in particular one group claims that extinction of specific species of plants and animals as the prime environmental issue and others argue that there are much more troubling environmental problems, hence both views will be discussed in the following paragraph.
Earth has been around for billions of years, although many species have faced extinction in this time, humans entry into this picture a few thousand years ago changed so many things. Human beings as a species is by far the most responsible for extinction of more than 90% of known species of animals and plants. This have been alarming many activists and policy makers around the world, now they are focusing on measures to conserve such endangered species. For instance, panda is a native animal of china, during the last decacde it was in the verge of extinction and tagged as an endangered species, from then multiple measures such as breeding labs and reserved forest areas have been created to protect that particular species.
On the other hand, people see extinction as a law of nature and advise to move on and focus on other serious environmental problems such as global warming that is responsible for bizzare climate changes with varied monsoon pattern. These factors grossly affect the human population in terms of their habitat as well as their food source. Nevertheless, pollution and global warming causes myriad of health issues ranging from empysema, asthma, skin and conjuctival allergies.
To conclude, I solemnly beleive, every species irrespective of a plant or an animal, all are equally improtant in this world and deserve an opportunity to lead their life peacefully and humans are capable to address such issues with utmost care and come up with valid solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'moving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'advise' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: moving
...xtinction as a law of nature and advise to move on and focus on other serious environme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, then, well, for instance, in particular, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23547400612 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76769391709 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617737003058 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0277344575 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.2 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16988118658 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613387230859 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790081760518 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966938572308 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647215581666 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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