Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Modern technology plays a significant role in our daily life, and the young generation is not an exception in this regard. It is considered that children should not be allowed to use mobile phones when they are at school, while others think that it is not an wise idea of keeping restrict themselves from using their cell phones. This essay will discuss the possible reasons that support the both views, and the impact they have on the youth.
To begin with, mobile phones are inseparable part of our life, but it sometimes bring demerits. Children spend a major portion of time at school for acquiring knowledge after home. If they are allowed to keep their phones during school period, they might not focus with full concentration on the class lectures. Besides, they may spend time playing games instead of joining classes or talking over phones. For example, some days back a number of students were caught at red hand of playing video games while teacher was delivering an important lecture. This was happened at one of the reputed schools of our locality. Hence, students should not be permitted of using phones during school time.
On the other hand, parents can contact to their children easily via phones during the school period. Moreover, mobile phones might be helpful to assist obtaining knowledge online. Students can search any particular topic on the internet if they have a doubt for instance. Thereby, they can solve the problem by themselves, and improve their knowledge. Consequently, these might be a benefit of having mobile phones.
To conclude, it can be said that having cell phones can consume valuable time of students, but it might be a mean of doubt solving as well. However, it entirely depends on children.
- Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 67
- Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person Why do you think this is the case What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person 61
- Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94880546075 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45032180045 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576791808874 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9207879555 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2941176471 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314599906164 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100197796975 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102863581575 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194832210208 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413745905736 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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