Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative.
Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.
Nobody can deny the importance of parental influence in the lives of children, and some people believe they should spend all of their time with their families, while others believe it is unnecessary. I believe that children should not spend all of their time with their families, but rather should have a healthy balance of time spent with their peers and parents.
Admittedly, there are some obvious benefits of spending much time with parents as it helps the children to learn about their family culture and discipline. They will not come under the influence of outsiders, and will also not learn bad habits from them. Parents who can set a good example and establish ground rules for their children's behavior can help them develop suitable codes of conduct, avoiding problems such as bullying, truancy, and criminality later in life. Furthermore, being with the household should reduce the risk of children falling victim to crimes such as abduction, or succumbing to bad peer pressure.
On the other hand, kids should be given the opportunity to spend time apart from their parents because some abilities and traits, such as teamwork, empathy, and bargaining, are learned from peers. A child's creativity and imagination will be enhanced if he is given the opportunity to participate in an activity with peers. Experiments have shown that youngsters who connect with friends have far better confidence than their counterparts who play alone or solely with their relatives. Furthermore, some children will become worried if they do not have time to go out and talk to their friends.
To summarize, children should still spend time with their families to acquire habits and life skills, but spending all the time should not. Exposure to the outside world has a favorable influence on them as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, well, while, apart from, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13513513514 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58938102319 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1953341479 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342839024885 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140932311935 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125259867243 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241496241382 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111188045957 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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