The efficient functioning of society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they want. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Laws and principles are the foundation of modern society. In my opinion, society could barely function well wihout the deterrant effect of laws, although some conservative laws may be the obstacle of innovation.
Human beings share the same desire and impulsion despite of their races, ages or nationalities. Some fundemental desires like curiosity would accelerate the pace of discoverying the world, while others such as violent and sexual impulsion may lure us towards darkness. Laws are the crystallizations of human wisdom through the arduous process of controlling and guiding desires. The absence of them would result in chaos in our society. For example, enterprenuers would probably force workers to work overtime so as to generate as much venue as possible if we don’t enact work-related laws. The main function of laws is to offer protection to ordinary people.
On the other hand, if the law is too old-fashioned, it may slow down the development speed of our society. For example, if government enacts strict laws in business area, people are prone to be more conservative and less willing to make risky decisions, which would surpress the innovation of business market.
In conclusion, although too conservative laws may have adverse impacts on the creativity and development of society, rules and laws are needed if we want a stable and safety society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...probably force workers to work overtime so as to generate as much venue as possible if w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27727272727 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97944403822 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5912215639 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.545454545 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138865975637 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521380231143 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442337116257 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894567987989 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388206729003 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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