The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The information about the recycling process of plastic bottles is depicted in the given diagram. This process has nine major steps for recycling plastic bottles.
The diagram reveals that in the first stop people throw waste plastic bottles into rubbish boxes, which is taken by a big lorry in the next step for sending that waste plastic to the recycling centre. In the third step, the bottles are sorted by the worker and then compressed into blocks through machines. After this, plastic bottles are crushed into small pieces with the help of crushing wheels.
Furthermore, small pieces of plastic are washed after crushing. In the sixth stage, washed plastic is used for producing plastic pellets by a machine, thereafter heating the plastic pellets to form raw material. Raw material is stored in a systematic way and used for producing new products namely new bottles, pencils, and t-shirts in the final stage.
Overall, it is clear that waste plastic bottles are recycled to form new products through various steps; each stage is interconnected and vital for the recycling process.
- The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Most people are becoming overweight Some say that raising the price of fatty foods will solve this problem to what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The diagram shows the process by which plastic is recycled Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features 78
- In some countries students pay for their college or university fees while in some others the government pays for them Do you think the advantages that government pays the money outweigh the disadvantages 67
- In many countries the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse What causes this problem What measures can be taken to solve it 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a systematic way" with adverb for "systematic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16292134831 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44188222265 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556179775281 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7886669969 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.111111111 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261479966596 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127111722051 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902172822302 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190434925389 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872466031904 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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