The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offence (crime).
The bar chart provides information about the percentage of seven different types of crimes that were committed by men or women in September of 2008. Overall, violent crime and theft were two prominent figures, surprisingly with the female proportion higher than their counterpart in both cases. In contrast, in terms of getting caught by the police, robbery, as well as fraud, had the smallest percentage.
There were three crime categories, which are violence, theft and fraud, that female figures outstripped male figures. Shockingly, violence made up the largest proportion at about 31% and 33% for men and women respectively. The gap between the two genders in the theft section was even wider with female figure about 10% higher than male, to be more precise, 20% for male and 31% for the other. Unlike the above-mentioned crimes, fraud and forgery hold an unexpectedly low proportion, that is to say, it was just under 3% in total.
The pattern was reserved in the remaining types of crime. In other words, males committed crimes, which is robbery, burglary, criminal damage, drug and other offences, higher than females. The lowest level of offence was the robbery group and this made up smaller than 5%. This number was almost double in the burglary category. For the drug offences group, the criminal damage group and the other offences group, the gap between men and women were identically 3%, with male figures were 7%, 10% and 15% respectively.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well, in contrast, as well as, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07053941909 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62343721543 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572614107884 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5982428061 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200861685926 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725507072305 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578006623065 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13351624926 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210533780423 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well, in contrast, as well as, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07053941909 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62343721543 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572614107884 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5982428061 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200861685926 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725507072305 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578006623065 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13351624926 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210533780423 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.