Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
Environment has recently been an alarming issue among society since a plenty of environmental problems are attributed to human’s actions. Fortunately, these hardships can be overcome by taking several measures. This essay would explain some of the negative human impacts on natural habitats and suggest unfoldings for governments and individuals.
With respect to the damage that human beings have induced to the nature, unwholesome lifestyles of citizens might take the blame. For example, plastic products which are difficult to decompose are though widely used in numerous countries all over the world. What is more, residents still have the habit of using private transport instead of public one. This aggravates air pollution in the area and can be a crucial factor in global warming. Besides, contamination also stems from industrial waste. As the world develops, more factories and industrial areas come into operation. In some regions, the lack of filtration systems and techniques significantly contributes to the rise in the amount of waste dumped into water bodies and the atmosphere.
In order to alleviate the exacerbation of environmental issues, feasible actions should be considered and taken. Regarding governments, it would be a brilliant idea if they impose a strict restriction on the number of toxic materials discharged into the surroundings, along with heavily fining those who exceed the limits. Moreover, it is essential for factories to install high-quality filtration systems so as to ensure that the toxicity is mitigated as much as possible. With a view to each inhabitants, daily habits namely using plastic products or moving on private vehicles ought to be replaced by healthier ones. In lieu of shopping with a number of plastic bags, citizens can bring tote bags made of materials such as cloth or sedge, which are reusable. Additionally, when one has to move for long distance, he had better use bus or subway rather than his own car; or if the destination is not too far, he can go on foot or ride a bicycle in place of using a motorbike.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that our planet is being destroyed by numerous human causes. However, so long as the above suggestions are considered and put into operation by governments and residents, the situations might be remarkably handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, what is more, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22994652406 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97751494396 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628342245989 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5961512201 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147506305499 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404220365147 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382437146998 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926090301309 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611244734174 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.