TPO 52 The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
While some people are inclined towards that societies regulate youngsters to follow the rules is too strict. Others, on the other hand, disagree with this statement. As far as I concerned, my own opinion is that it is necessary for youngsters to obey the rules. In the following essay, I will delve into reasons and examples to support my viewpoint.
The first noteworthy reason to be mentioned is that obeying the rules set by the societies can reduce the probability for youngsters to make mistakes. There are many criminal events happen around us, which means these people do not follow the regulations. As a result, they do something breaks the peace of society. For example, one of my friends, who is reluctant to follow the rules set by his parents. When he grows up, he puts himself into a trouble and has to go to prison for a decade because he robs the bank.
Moreover, following the strict rules provides the youngsters a chance to learn to be independence. Many youngsters do the house chores when they are little. The parents can regulate them to do the house chores. Therefore, when their children grow up, youngsters have capability of doing the house chores by themselves. Take my own experience as an example. When I was a university student, I had to live far away from my home by myself. The food was expensive over there. Luckily, I learnt how to cook on my own so I did not have to worry about my meal.
Last but not least, it is crucial to youngsters are able to organize the teamwork, and following this strict rules allow them to learn how to be a good team member. For instance, when I was a senior high school student, I had to do a project with my classmate to win the competition. Our team members wanted to set the rules to achieve the goal. Subsequently, my teammates set various regulations for our team. Consequently, following these strict rules helped us to have a well-performance and took second place in this competition.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I agree that youngsters have to follow these strict rules since that can decline the chance of making mistakes, learn not to rely on anyone and to be a good team member.
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- TPO 47 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While some people are inclined towards that s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65364583333 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74297630314 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505208333333 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6664733942 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6956521739 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6956521739 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21739130435 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183026871198 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561247582986 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079163750722 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121598150213 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567342543776 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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