Some people think that children should obey rules and do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other people think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Some people hold the opinion that it is benificial for children to undoubtedly follow parents’ and teachers’ orders, while others think that submissive children have limited development in the future. In my opinion, children should be taught about rules and regulations when they are young, but the restrictions should be less once they grow up.
Rules and regulations are essential for children to teach them what is right and what is wrong, especially in primary and secondary school. Childhood and adolescene are critical periods when a person’s basic value and outlook of life are formed. Hence, with proper education of principles and laws, a healthy behavioural habit can be rooted in teenagers’ heart. For example, if children are taught to obey exam rules and study hard to achieve high scores, they would probably become diligent and honest adults. Otherwise, if they are encouraged to break the rules and cheat in the exam, it is highly likely that they would indulge in taking short cuts, lying and stealing, which may lead them to jail.
On the other hand, if teenagers are controlled too much, they would probably become conservative and lose the ability to break the mould. Too many restrictions will curb the impulsion and courage for innovation, which is critical to make a breakthrough. For example, if teenagers are told to follow all the rules, they may not impose any doubts against their teachers. As a result, if they start a career as a scientific researcher, they would not dare to question the exsiting experiment results. In that case, innovations and breakthroughs are hardly created.
In my view, principles are needed when we build up young children’s basic value, but it is also important to reduce our supervisions on teenagers when they try to make a difference.
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- Some people think that children should obey rules and do what their parents and teachers want them to do Other people think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood Discuss both views and state your opinion 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earcher, they would not dare to question the exsiting experiment results. In that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, second, so, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10774410774 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80370918261 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579124579125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6215250184 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.692307692 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192872056665 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630337560246 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072722774945 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117455558723 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836505435163 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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