The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
In recent years, it has been increasingly common to see the increase of population that appears in several countries, especially the developing countries. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with this statement that overpopulation is the most alarming issue, while there are myriad diseases that affect the livelihood of many people around the world.
To begin with, there is no doubt that the rise of the population puts an abundance of impacts on the life of people. Due to the fact that the main reason is the lack of knowledge in some countries that live in poverty, especially while the underprivileged are not be equipped with the information and the consequences. Moreover, the over-exploration has been depleting natural resources, which lead to the poverty of some countries. In addition, the consequences on the daily routine of people are being harmed because of the expansion in the unemployment rate and the crime rate in the urban, which put the society under a state of anarchy. Nevertheless, because the lack of settlement is increasing, the environment will be affected and devastated by the exploration of government on the jungle in order to enlarge the landfills.
However, this is no longer to be defined as an impact on the livelihood of residents. Due to the fact that the educations are expanding to the underprivileged, who are lack of information about family planning. As the main reason is eliminated, the other influences will be wrecked though. Additionally, the world is faced with the greatest disease that is Covid-19, which is desperately needed to be solved by the collaboration between the government and residents. The fact that Covid-19 is the most pressing issue taking a heavy toll on the economy of countless countries that lead to bankruptcy, especially in the countries that live in poverty. Thereby, the development plans are being delayed to more than a century and the increase of unemployment and crime rate that appear in the cities. Notwithstanding, the disruption of many cultures and traditions because of the increase in the mortality rates.
To sum up, I believe that over-exploration causes many detrimental on the Earth and it can seem tantamount to the disease. However, the foremost problem that societies around the world have to deal with is the ongoing Covid-19 pandemic
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...s are expanding to the underprivileged, who are lack of information about family planni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, in addition, no doubt, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16578947368 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18037067301 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489473684211 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5680447429 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6875 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0777350607245 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240645133975 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352598971329 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486629336106 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164880137202 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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