The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011
The provided line graph compares three ways (in person, by letter/email, and by telephone) in terms of the ratio of enquiries in a city sent to the Tourist Information Office in the first six months of 2011
Overall, the digit of questions asked in person and by telephone displayed substantial rises while this figure for letter or email declined dramatically. Excluding the first month, enquiring in person and by telephone were considerably more common than the other one.
In January, there were above 400 enquiries sent in person which was the lowest value in three ways while the figures for letter/email and telephone were wildly higher, below 800 and 900 in order. In the following months, the rate of questions asked in person increased sharply before reaching its peak at 1900 in June. In addition, enquiring by telephone also depicted an upward trend after increasing twice from 800 in February to 1600 in June
In contrast, this period saw a considerable decrease in the percentage of enquiries delivered by letter and email. It fell substantially to below 400 in May and then remain stable in the last month.
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- The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011 Write at least 150 words 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fore reaching its peak at 1900 in June. In addition, enquiring by telephone also d...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...from 800 in February to 1600 in June In contrast, this period saw a considerabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, so, then, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00531914894 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75445131326 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601063829787 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.8585203811 43.030603864 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.833333333 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177744279362 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782346341129 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631155868352 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130252075109 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114997470143 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.