Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out.
What are the causes?
What are the solutions?
It is a common belief that many people are nowadays feeling insecure. This essay will address the increase of criminal activities as the primary reason, and provide tightened public security as a viable solution.
In many countries, especially in developing nations such as Indonesia, there has been a significant increase in criminal activities in the community since many people are suffering in the pandemic era. Many people have experienced losing jobs because many companies decide to lay off many of their workers to cut financial spending. This leads to many people being unemployed and to meet a daily basic need they may commit criminal acts such as pickpocketing or even robbery. This phenomenon is disturbing many people in society resulting in increasing insecure feelings.
To deal with this problem, I think the government can take several approaches. First of all, the government has to increase security in the community by deploying more police to patrol all the time. This way, people can directly seek help if they are the victim of criminal activity, and law enforcement can directly go to the crime scene to provide assistance for the victim or catch lawbreaker. Secondly, providing hotline services is also believed as a suitable solution since if people witness a criminal act, they can report the activity to the police. Thus, many people in the community can help each other to maintain peace and secure life.
To sum up, people have lived in an insecure situation due to the increase of criminal acts in the community. Government can provide various support for people in the community to overcome this problem such as increasing the number of law enforcement and providing hotline services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, i think, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16785714286 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75202847265 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.516375895 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141426448143 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615776471593 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468312554687 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894534980428 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404952270282 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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