Nowadays, people are able to use the Internet to do an increasing number of tasks.
Is this a positive or negative development?
It is impossible today to imagine the world without the Internet and almost all activities and tradings are always related to the network. From my viewpoint, this is a positive development which can lead to enhance people’s life.
It is obvious that Internet brings benefits for both workers and companies.If company directors want to conduct quick meetings or conferences, this can can be done using special applications such as zoom and skype which work on the Internet.As a result, it can save their time.Moreover, electronic devices can help workers to communicate with foreign companies in any other language through translation apps. In addition, many schools have developed a model of distance learning due to the pandemic. Students can save travel costs and stay at home.
Secondly, with the help of the Internet , people do online shoppings. They can order any items, for instance clothes from almost anywhere in the world. People can make a better decision to buy what they like after taking prices, sizes and models of the products into consideration. Likewise, this process assists people to save a great deal of time, they do not have to shop hours and choose clothes when it can be done at home. Furthemore, people can make fast food deliveries if guests arrive unexpectedly. It occurs much faster than cooking at home, as a consequence, they stay satisfied.
By way of conclusion, people use the Internet to complete a large number of their tasks thanks to the modern Internet that can solve unimaginable jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80231857992 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.6719897334 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198107702459 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758769776493 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746957771068 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14298043507 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582938338515 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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