Have YOU ever thought that YOU will enter an intimate relationship when YOU go to college? Becoming enamored in college is widely considered to be a reasonable time to experience and have valuable memories. I completely agree with the idea that falling in love in college is a good idea.
Being a support for each other is the first reason students should fall in love in college. To quote from Princess Diana :”If YOU find someone YOU love in YOUR life, then hang on to that love”. Referring to when YOU find YOUR other half, that will be a solid support and YOU should cherish that love. In fact, life in a university environment will bring a lot of pressure, at such times, asking YOUR lover on a date will make all sorrows disappear. This evidence tells us that having love makes us positive to overcome challenges and difficulties.
In addition to the reason above, I also believe that becoming enamored in college can support YOU strive for the future. According to Gocsinhvien statistic, many people have been in a love relationship while in college and get married in the future. Follow that, when YOU fall in love, YOU will make an effort and try to change in a more positive direction. This proof shows us that college loves support to change ourselves in the right direction.
Some people say that students should not fall in love while in college. While it is true that students may have trouble and make mistakes with their lover. However, many Younger people have escaped the prejudices of society about students who love to have the right direction for themselves.
To conclude, it is a suitable idea for students to fall in love in college. YOU should spend time getting to know the people around YOU. In that way YOU will have a beautiful and memorable time.
Have YOU ever thought that YOU will enter an intimate relationship when YOU go to college? Becoming enamored in college is widely considered to be a reasonable time to experience and have valuable memories. I completely agree with the idea that falling in love in college is a good idea.
Being a support for each other is the first reason students should fall in love in college. To quote from Princess Diana :”If YOU find someone YOU love in YOUR life, then hang on to that love”. Referring to when YOU find YOUR other half, that will be a solid support and YOU should cherish that love. In fact, life in a university environment will bring a lot of pressure, at such times, asking YOUR lover on a date will make all sorrows disappear. This evidence tells us that having love makes us positive to overcome challenges and difficulties.
In addition to the reason above, I also believe that becoming enamored in college can support YOU strive for the future. According to Gocsinhvien statistic, many people have been in a love relationship while in college and get married in the future. Follow that, when YOU fall in love, YOU will make an effort and try to change in a more positive direction. This proof shows us that college loves support to change ourselves in the right direction.
Some people say that students should not fall in love while in college. While it is true that students may have trouble and make mistakes with their lover. However, many Younger people have escaped the prejudices of society about students who love to have the right direction for themselves.
To conclude, it is a suitable idea for students to fall in love in college. YOU should spend time getting to know the people around YOU. In that way YOU will have a beautiful and memorable time.
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- Have YOU have had a sense of loneliness every Christmas Eves or felt jealous to YOUR friend when he or her was presented Valentine Day s gift Love in YOUR air but not everyone could realize it even though YOU have ever felt head over heels in love with so 78
- Studying ATC program is a bad decision Until now many people still believe that English language only helps improve English ability soft skills but does not equip specialized knowledge like other majors It is because of this point of view that the English 73
- Student love is often beautiful and romantic it becomes colorful memories in student life Some people believe everyone should experience love during their time in university However falling in love doesn t play an important part when YOU re in college bec 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Unpaired symbol: '“' seems to be missing
... college. To quote from Princess Diana :”If YOU find someone YOU love in YOUR lif...
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Message: There should be a space after a closing quote.
Suggestion: ” If
... college. To quote from Princess Diana :”If YOU find someone YOU love in YOUR life,...
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... in YOUR life, then hang on to that love”. Referring to when YOU find YOUR other ...
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
.... YOU should spend time getting to know the people around YOU. In that way YOU will have a beautiful ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, then, while, in addition, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73162939297 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49520971311 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495207667732 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4313096024 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.2777777778 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.504616349733 0.244688304435 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176845063257 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158976816287 0.0667982634062 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351672189789 0.151304729494 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.28570123298 0.056905535591 502% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.