Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Nowadays, it seems that celebrates are getting highly paid but in my opinion, it's legal and also meaningful. But there are more jobs which should also get their exact due. In this essay, I will mention why entertainers are paying high and whom we also should pay high for their contribution to the nation.
If I am being honest then I must say that I avoid my boredom and monotony by watching movies or sports than in my free time I also have songs for relaxation.
Entertainers are giving so much effort to do best in their own field, they are making songs by waking so many nights and after a certain, they are getting their due and for this, they get highly paid. if we talk about players and film stars, they are also doing the same, keeping their bodies fit for the game and again for movies. Then another reason is their working tenure is limited and short, so they save this money for future purposes.
On the other hand, the person from whom we are learning the basic lessons of our life and the person who is being awake for many nights for our safety, and lastly the person who is giving treatment to us when we become ill, they are none but our teacher, police and military forces, doctor. This person should get a high a salaries for their deeds.
So, in my opinion, I should say those who are involved in the entertainment world or the celebrities who deserve to be highly paid because of their effort towards industry and towards us at the same time.However, nevertheless teachers, doctors and military people these guys also get highly paid. I would rather say government should look after this matter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...due and for this, they get highly paid. if we talk about players and film stars, t...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a salary' or simply 'salaries'?
Suggestion: a salary; salaries
..., doctor. This person should get a high a salaries for their deeds. So, in my opinion, ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ndustry and towards us at the same time.However, nevertheless teachers, doctors and mil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, look, nevertheless, so, then, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55631399317 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30389836485 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7972669532 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.363636364 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160770637815 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691141126163 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398991531985 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925231884339 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474189195445 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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