Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Over the past decades, people’s views have differed on whether or not sports are leisure pursuits. While some people approve of this suggestion, I firmly believe that sport has an enormous impact on the community.
First and foremost, many think that sport should be considered an optional task to do on a day-to-day basis. To begin with, the initial reason why some people underestimate this kind of outdoor activity is owing to the perception that they should devote their time dealing with the financial burden, rather than taking up sports. Given that most adults' time was spent on work to pay their bills, they would struggle for balancing their lifestyles with any more doings, let alone exercises. Consequently, sport is not regarded as essential due to the fact that they may adversely influence jobs and opportunities to make more money. Secondly, many people disparage sport thanks to a lack of information on the advantages sport can bring - increasing productivity, preventing diseases, and lengthening our longevity. The depreciation in sport will continue until they are able to access this knowledge.
However, I still reckon that sport acts as a positive contributing factor to the improvement of society’s healthcare and prosperity on the whole. According to an Oxford case study on obesity in the US, England, and Australia, the noticeable consumption of high-cholesterol food is posing a threat to the governments on the rise of cardiovascular and diabetic patients. As a result, it is urgent to encourage residents to play sports, with a view to avoiding a sedentary lifestyle, thus improving their physical and mental health. Furthermore, sports festivals and events that are held annually make plenty of economic contributions to many nations. People living in these countries will no longer be in fear of unemployment since there would be numerous occupations given from tourism and commerce.
In conclusion, while many people disregard sport because they do not know the profits of playing sports in their lives, I side with those who value sports as one driver of societal development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, while, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29289940828 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99362799071 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633136094675 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4364524524 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.785714286 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222265227291 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727660220535 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551869650512 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146151945155 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714630974085 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.