A flow chart shows the process of processing wool into cloth.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart describes the process of transforming the sheep wool into cloth.
It is evident that wool undergoes the series of process to produce cloth.
In the first step, the sheeps are sheared and their wool is carefully cleaned after finishing the this step. The next step is drying the wool, then it continues to be spinned to become the strings. Not the whole production of wool can move to the next steps as a little bit of it is use for recycling. Then the strings are kept in the tuft storage before being spinned one more time and changing the form to the balls of yarn. At the last step, the balls of yarn pass through the complicated process to make the finaled products which are called knitting and jacket of carpet.
In summary, there are nine steps in the transformation of the sheep whool into two forms of cloths.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...ol is carefully cleaned after finishing the this step. The next step is drying the wool,...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...of wool can move to the next steps as a little bit of it is use for recycling. Then the st...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56578947368 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31399451968 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0542837668 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.75 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175674886314 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919354741045 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981731790178 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154015281317 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104294430953 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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