The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The first line graph illustrates the proportion of electrical equipments' ownership in households while the second graph gives information about the number of hours that people do housework weekly. The data is collected from 1920 to 2019.
In general, it is apparent that three applliances saw an upward trend throughout the period and vacuum cleaner and washine machine are commonly used these days. What is more, human has a tendency to do less housework than they did in the past.
It is noticeable that the percentage of refrigerator's owner began at 0% at the beginning of the period then rocketed to 100% eighty years later. Similarly, the figure for vacuum cleaner started at 30% before rising steadily to 80% in 2000, became equal to refrigerator's. Meanwhile, the percentage of washing machine was the highest among all with 40% and continued to increase to over 70% despite a small dip in 1980.
With regard to the number of hours people spend on doing housework per week, the figure began at 50 hours in 1920 which then fell down gradually during the period and reached such a low number of solely 10 hours nowadays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'equipments'' or 'equipment's'?
Suggestion: equipments'; equipment's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, similarly, so, then, while, in general, what is more, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62133921323 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4673067078 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 5.23603664747 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114913061794 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503597115403 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554091326424 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737374295061 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694699707204 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.