Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days a few people assume that the most urgent environmental issue that humankind is facing is the loss of natural wildlife. However, others believe that there are more crucial problems that is putting the environment at risk. In this essay both points of view will be discussed along with my personal opinion.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that the extinction of numerous species are putting the biodiversity under threat. This is because thousands of trees are cut down, hundreds of animals are dying from hunting, deforestation and so on. Hence, the diverse of biodiversity is considerably affected and may lead to further issues that human has to face such as natural disasters and loss of product consumption.
On the other hand, there still remains a host of serious problems that need to be put into consideration. The utmost one is water pollution as pollutants and toxic waste are dumped into rivers and canals . As a result, inahbitants of many countries such as India, Ethiopia, South Africa are facing the shortage of clean water sources to serve their daily routines. Another issue that is no less vital is air pollution when emissions from factories and vehicles are tremendously affecting the ennvironment. Since then, breathing problems and other health issues are putting human’s life at risk. Therefore, these issues should not be neglected.
In conclusion, although the problem of wildlife extinction is one of the utmost issues that people need to consider, other urgent problem such as air pollution and water pollutions should also be take into consideration . Furthemore, people should join hands to deal with these issues as soon as possible and prevent further unwanted consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20143884892 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82010819014 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9648928838 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168575579672 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572251595636 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466639261077 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113393757736 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074755059951 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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