Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, environmental protection is one of the most attention-grabbing problems. While some people agree with the idea that individual effort is useless, I believe that protecting the environment should be the responsibility of not only governments but also individuals.
On the one hand, it cannot be denied that resolving global issues needs actions from governments. Only the government can pass laws aimed at protecting the environment. Without these laws, there would be few dramatic improvements in environmental conditions.
On the other hand, individuals also have an important role in environmental protection. Firstly, laws passed by politicians are useless without the contribution of citizens. Moreover, there are various ways that people can help shield the environment, such as recycling more, buying more energy-efficient household items, using renewable energy sources or planting more trees in their garden. Therefore, this work will reduce waste and fossil fuel usage.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I maintain that the responsibility of saving the Earth belongs to not only politicians but also individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77777777778 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4007444412 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707602339181 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0527616943 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184308108288 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669501022165 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050389762624 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104669452601 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434083444864 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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