Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Food is a basic human need. To maintain a healthy body it is not necessary to consume meat,
rather it is suggested that we should become vegetarian for a healthy life. I strongly
agree with the later opinion nd this essay will demostrate the advantages of becoming vegetarain
is more more effective for a healthy food.
Meat is a food which is always been on the priority list of the people. However, it is
always suggested by nutritians that, red meat is detrimental to health. Specially, young generation
is inclined to junk food which are mostly made of meat causes obesity and heart attack
at young age. For example, a study by WHO demonstrate that heart attack has increased
to 30 % among young people age ranging from 30-37 years. In addition, recent studies shows that meats
contain some ingridients which causes cancer.
On the other hand, vegetables contain all the nutrients we need for a healthy life. There are some
vegetables in nature which are not only tasty but also contain all six nutrients that human body requires.
Additionally, some green vegetables directly burns fat which we gain by consuming meat. A comparison made by Oxford University
shows that, rate of early death is significantly low among the vegetarian. For instances, a tribe from Tibbet
who are 100% vegetarian lives for an average age of 97 years.
To conclude, studies done so far shows that meat has more negative impacts on human body. In contrast, vegetables
are advantagious to human body. So, for a healthy food is not necessary to meat, rather we could eat vegetables solely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Whom
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Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01872659176 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67060973979 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4577469592 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14354554156 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511024747183 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498575766099 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504117806991 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445167035591 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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