Do you agree or disagree, it is a waste of money for a government to fund space travel.
Space travel, an eternal dream pursued by many people, has been in the limelight recently and provoked a heated discussion centering on whether space travel is worth the investment. In many people's opinion, spending money on space travel is useless. Contrary to their views is my perspective that it is not a waste of money for a government to fund space travel. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in the following part.
What must be prioritized is that space travel places humans as beneficiaries. To be more specific, many space programs provide a lot of methods to solve problems, such as famine, on the Earth. For example, Shengzhou 5, China's first manned spacecraft, brought several types of corn seeds into space in 2003. Two of them doubled their yields after being exposed to the space rays for two weeks. Hence, these two kinds were brought back to the Earth and grown widely in China. Today, many people appreciate the corns' good taste and low price. Since they have extremely high yields, they are now the most effective ways to solve the problem of famine in Henan, a region with a huge amount of population in the North of China. Therefore, I believe that space travel can benefit people a lot and is not a waste of money.
What is equally important is that space travel can boost the economy of a country, which is worth the cost. In detail, not only does space travel create numerous jobs, but it also increases national tax revenues. I can think of no better illustration than the statistic. NASA, an independent agency responsible for the space program in the United State, indicated in its 2021 economic impact report that NASA supported more than 320,000 positions, such as engineers and industrial designers, and generated an estimated 7 billion dollars in taxes throughout America. There is no denying that the investment of only 0.5 percent of the federal budget, was worthwhile due to the significant economic output. Accordingly, I reckon that it is not a waste of money for the government to fund space travel.
Admittedly, the government can also solve social problems or promote the economy by spending the budget on providing food for the poor or increasing the tax. However, those methods can not last long, and space travel is more durable and can solve those problems thoroughly due to the rich resources in space and the huge amounts of jobs and taxes it will create. Thus, I still hold the belief that it is not a waste of money for the government to fund space travel.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that it is not a waste of money for the government to fund space travel.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-12-01 | wqx | 71 | view |
| 2022-12-01 | wqx | 70 | view |
| 2022-03-20 | xinxindiandeng | 73 | view |
| 2022-03-20 | xinxindiandeng | 73 | view |
| 2022-03-20 | xinxindiandeng | 76 | view |
- Do you agree or disagree it is a waste of money for a government to fund space travel 76
- Do you agree or disagree it is a waste of money for a government to fund space travel 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Students are more interested in politics today than they were in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Young people today are more likely to give time and effort to improve the world than young people were in the past 70
- A friend who is intelligent is much better than a friend with a good sense of humor 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple a lot and is not a waste of money. What is equally important is that space ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, i feel, i reckon, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76637554585 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56529033781 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513100436681 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5213772617 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2272727273 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39463252657 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151015092002 0.076458572812 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1717803308 0.0737576698707 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30415244015 0.150856017488 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118915989356 0.0645574589148 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.