Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Some people think that arranging an international sports event brings a myriad of benefits to the host country while other people believe that it has several drawbacks. In my opinion, while it has some adverse effects, the upside overshadows the downside.
On the one hand, hosting an international sports event has some demerits. Firstly, organizing international sporting events can leave the host country with budget deficits if only a small part of the investment costs is returned. After a country is chosen to host a sports event, a large number of venues is spent on the cost of security and other general infrastructures such as hotels and public transportation services. These facilities can be wasted if they are not reused after serving the event. For example, many stadiums were constructed to serve Olympic Athens in 2004 and since then, they have become degraded because of the lack of maintenance rendering them useless to hold events. After a country is chosen to host a sports event, a large number of venues is spent on the cost of security and other general infrastructures such as hotels and public transportation services. Additionally, in the context of Covid-19 pandemic as now, there are chances of spreading viruses during sports events, causing the outbreak of the epidemic. That is because many people from various countries and cultures attend such events so they may transmit viruses to others.
On the other hand, although running an international sport event has some disadvantages, its merits can be more glaring. By effectively hosting the athletic events, the host country may establish its reputation as a prosperous and civilized nation. People from all over the world will assess a country based on how successfully it runs sporting events. China, which hosted the 2008 'Olympic Games,' is a great example. Everyone had their worries and misgivings about China, but it astounded everyone with its flawless hosting of the world's most famous athletic event. China not only hosted the event with tremendous success, but it also succeeded in altering people's perceptions of the country around the world. In addition, conducting such events can help a country grow economically. People from all over the world will attend not only the sporting events, but also go on a visit to the host country's natural, cultural, and historical sites. The majority of those who attend such events are privileged and aristocratic, and they spend a lot of money on accommodations and entertainment. This in turn uplifts the tourism and related sectors such as art and craft of the country. Eventually, the revenue of the country increases making the country economically strong.
In conclusion, while hosting sports events has some demerits, I would contend that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ed. After a country is chosen to host a sports event, a large number of venues is spen...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...untry is chosen to host a sports event, a large number of venues is spent on the cost of security...
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Line 3, column 731, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ts. After a country is chosen to host a sports event, a large number of venues is spen...
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Line 3, column 745, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...untry is chosen to host a sports event, a large number of venues is spent on the cost of security...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2376.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23348017621 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86929255395 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497797356828 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.0 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0853428418 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35679914761 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112588683584 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101741188368 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270453004939 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109633501111 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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