Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business, while others think that it provides more business opportunities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
There is a controversial statement heating a debate on whether climate change could lead to negative effects on business or create more promising offers. Both the views will be discussed before my inclinations in the ensuing paragraphs
Admittedly, traditional industries which manufacture products relying solely on consuming a colossal amount of natural resources and energy could face tangible burdens. Due to the impact of climate change, enacting laws by the government on reducing the emission and waste to the environment could be a serious challenge to the old-fashion production lines, where the machines are degrading and cannot guarantee the new environmental requirements. Moreover, people’s awareness on climatic problems is increasing and switching to using eco-friendly products. Companies who fail to catch up with this tendency would lose their customers, and consequently, a myriad amount of revenue.
Nevertheless, this wind of change could provide other concrete opportunities. Novel processes and cutting-edge technologies are invented to mitigate both financial and climatic issues. Renewable energy, such as hydro energy, solar energy, could open the door for various new investments. This shifting tendency could not only provide countless job opportunities and business potentials but also secure sustainable and green-growth development for the future. We could see Tesla as a landmark pioneer for success in this race. This innovative corporation with the ambition of transforming the whole fossil fuel car industry to fully electric vehicles has become predominant in the US market and one of the largest global car manufacturers.
To recapitulate, despite having some negative impacts, I hold a firm belief that to succeed in the future, companies should design a plan to reduce their carbon footprint and cope with the climate change situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74285714286 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14732636778 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9980824767 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176642929816 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586454277644 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527433155886 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109698236989 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626449397813 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.09 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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