In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars.
Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
Many nations are witnessing the number of small businesses in town shrinking as the community prefers travelling to suburban stores. Personally, this wind of change could offer various merits and overcome its disadvantages.
There are several concrete reasons for this tendency. Firstly, moving store and business centres to the outskirt could help alleviate traffic congestion. Normally, small vendors are scattered all over the city, as a result, residents have to switch between multiple locations in order to purchase adequate amount of product, while the parking and traffic infrastructure is limited and could not accommodate a colossal number of vehicles at the same time. Hence, if the store relocates to the outside of the city centre, this alteration could release the burden on the city. Moreover, shopping in out of town stores is considered handier. Shopping malls supermarkets and megamalls are often located in the suburb. These shopping centres allow people to find almost every kind of item in one place at a more affordable price and save time for customers.
On the other hand, people might cast doubt that individuals without personal vehicles could face difficulties in accessing out-of-town stores because using a personal vehicle might help clients proactively manage their schedule and prevent time-consuming. However, the public transport system is becoming more innovative and ubiquitous. People could go back and forth from their houses to the suburban stores without any concerns about distance and time. Furthermore, this shifting in shopping preference might advocate people to move out of the city and dwell in the vicinity of the store location, relieving the pressure on the city population and environment.
In conclusion, although moving shopping centres away from the downtown area seems to have both positive and negative effects, I hold a firm belief that this trend could show significant benefits on population distribution and address numerous issues occurring in megacities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 596, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-town'?
Suggestion: out-of-town
...rden on the city. Moreover, shopping in out of town stores is considered handier. Shopping ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52580645161 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83725035804 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61935483871 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.2246869379 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.357142857 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273820769112 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085396214666 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834609453459 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137364371497 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822042342543 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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