In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
A healthy life is one of the essential factors that everyone should follow these days. Some people assert that the average weight of people is increasing in some countries but their levels of health and fitness continue to decrease. Some of the major causes of this problem are due to the sedentary lifestyle opted by the people and lack of awareness on diet and nutritional life. The above problems can be tackled by maintaining a proper diet plan and by having enough physical activity.
It is one of the vital factors that the people who live in the urban areas tend to involve more in unhealthy life due to their busy and hectic schedules, and not having proper knowledge on good and nutritional diets. For example, most people these days prefer to do white-collar jobs including computer and software jobs in IT organizations. They were forced to work more than the average working hours during peak times than usual to get high reputations and recognition from their upper hierarchies. This has become a habitat for those people which in turn leads them to a bad lifestyle. In the same way, people are more engaged in fewer sports activities. It is due to a lack of recreational activities such as playing outdoor games, and physical exercises which result in the accumulation of fats adding up in the muscles. As a consequence, gaining weight rapidly in a short period is another major cause.
Maintaining a balanced diet is a good factor. Everyone needs to take care of their body. A proper plan should be prepared and implemented by every individual. For instance, a working employee should make an appropriate schedule for their daily activities. Moreover, management should also provide gym and sports facilities for leisure activity at workplaces. So that, employers can take short breaks for walks during their working hours which aids them to work more productively than normal. Also, an educated person should enlighten their commodities such as family members and their near and dear ones about the need to take care of their diet seriously.
To recapitulate, as it stands now, adhering to an active lifestyle such as showing much enthusiasm on healthy and nutritional lives with proper balance on both personal and professional works is one of the major steps or the measures to be taken care of by the people to avoid obesity and health-related problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97493734336 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75050981421 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538847117794 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8915876772 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.473684211 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211890440014 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616693972171 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819367495584 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137317732079 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891533614713 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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