Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their home town Do the advantages of learning a new language in this way outweigh the disadvantages

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Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their home town. Do the advantages of learning a new language in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

There are numerous people agreed that coming abroad is the best method to study a new language. We can not be denied huge benefits which the method might bring, besides some drawbacks that we can encounter.
On the one hand, travelling not only can make us widen our horizen in term of culture, history, education, and other things similar to that but also help us have a better environment to practice speaking skill with native accents. In addition, We can get more opportunities to communicate with local individuals and to become be more and more familiar with some slangs which native people tend to use more. It is a truth that the more we pratice, the more we can communicate fluently with a not mother tongue language.
On the other hand, if we select the method to learn a foreign language, we will have to prepare many things such as money, passpost, visa, … especially a strong and optimic spirit can deal with suprising situations in a strange place without relatives. It can take a huge money to book tickets and rooms to stay which is not neccessary if you are in your home town. Moreovers, if we have unfortunately any health problems and we have no a medical insurance, it is so hard to being taken care of and treated.
To summerize, studying a foreign language via travelling abroad can bring for us both benefits and disadvantages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge money'.
Suggestion: huge money
...ge place without relatives. It can take a huge money to book tickets and rooms to stay which...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...unately any health problems and we have no a medical insurance, it is so hard to b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, in addition, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67452734754 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6422709793 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.444444444 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107758210993 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557901694365 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657736900703 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887985409056 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629037551588 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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