The number of people who at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing .
What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society ?
How can this problem be solved ?
In this day and age, being at risk of having severe health problems happens to everyone day by day because of the increase in the rate of being fatty . this essay will help peole gain in-depth knowledge about the cause and the solution to tackle this problem.
The first factor to be considered is the unbalanced diet. it can be seen that due to the growth of society, more and more people have to work heavily and do not set aside their free time to prepare nutrious meal and usually choose instant meal or street food instead. As a result , these food contain an amount of calories as well as the high rate of fat content . Therefore, when absoring these fatty food it will increase the risk of being obesity also experiencing heart disease and cancer. Balanced and alimentary meal will boost their energy and help them keep fit whereas instant meal will increase customer's weight controllably. Other factor need to be focused is the lack of doing physical activities. it can be seen that doing work out will achieve well-built body as well as being lean. The risk of facing overweight will reduce considerably. it has the fact that many people tend to choose doing exericise will be a good method to improve physical health and avoid being fat . Finally, habit is also the cause contributing to this issue. many teenager as well as the young lock themselves away outside world to be hooked on social media. The fact that it costs long hours to scroll through social media instead of speding little time on jogging or walking. The more calories you burn, the more healthier you are. In conclusion, it's high time we had to change our daily life as well as the way of having meal to avoid being overweight
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6204620462 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34198556603 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8866095898 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271503987069 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808719521445 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621972198189 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221270916807 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015700188393 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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