Every Individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting you position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
It is known that since ancient times laws are made to be complied and who do not comply the law are acting illegally. Usually, they are created by individuals we choose to perform that important task. I disagree with the given statement that citizens have a responsibility to obey just laws and disobey unjust laws for the reasons I will explore in the following paragraphs.
Laws are created by local and national politicians. Therefore, it is of extreme importance to choose and vote in the politicians we trust will be able to create just laws. It is necessary to examine their parties values and their personal values and beliefs to make a reasonable choice.
It is a citizen duty to observe the law. As previous stated, who do not comply it will be acting illegally and even can be charged or go to prison. For example, during the covid-19 pandemic I do not agree with some abusive restrictive laws created in my state that I considered unjust. However, I do not disobey any of that because I do not want to be an outlaw.
If we do not agree with some law that we think to be unjust the solution is to recur to who made it and try to change it. People, especially the youngsters, could arrange pacific demonstrations or protests to show their dissatisfaction with this decision-making. Furthermore, with the advent of the Internet we can use social medias to support or reprove political actions, arrange political demonstrations and constrain politician to do the changes in law we need.
However, if a dictatorial power assume my country and citizien’s religious and expression liberty are disrespected, it would be the most compelling reason that could led me to not obey a law. I would never obey a law that forced me to negate my faith in God or forced me to do things that are against my beliefs.
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- TOEFL T P O 10 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TPO 6 integrated writing 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72413793103 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91436596108 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510971786834 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9663577948 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.466666667 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209727307829 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752852092291 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599386699366 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119772234411 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640062938401 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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