Environmental damage is the problem of most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility?
Nowaday, the deterioration of environment is an important problem which attracts people's concerning very much. It is believed that environmental degradation is the issue of most nations.
There are two main factors causing this problem. Firstly, it is contaminated air. Everyday, we can see the growth of industrial production quickly that makes the air be polluted. The number of transportation is also increased fast. As a consequence, people bring a big disposal of harmful gases to the environment. These gases will destroy the ozon layer which protects us from ultraviolet rays. Secondly, clearing forests is also a vital reason to damage surroundings. The overpopulation and lucrative timber haverting have deforested the animals's habitat. For this reason, not only do animals have to struggle to survive but we can also see the frequent occurence of natural disasters.
All the peopel in the worth must take the responsibility about environmental degradation. Authorities have to enact new international laws to ensure citizens's compliance with all regulations in protecting our surroundings. Each person have to be improved their self-awareness about this problem and know that their daily performance would directly impact the habitat.
In conclusion, environmental damage is a very vital problem which needs to be solved as soon as imposible. We must do anything to protect our surroundings better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[2]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...oblem. Firstly, it is contaminated air. Everyday, we can see the growth of industrial pr...
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Line 2, column 535, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...crative timber haverting have deforested the animalss habitat. For this reason, n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53703703704 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31102359235 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657407407407 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8453172094 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.75 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177472316723 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521243546243 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618164002278 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107697769631 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302970843045 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.26 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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