It is commonly believed that in life, success is not the most important thing; it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when we fail. Do you agree with that idea? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
As most people believe, being successful is not of the most importance in one's life; instead, it is rather more crucial to keep being optimistic when we encounter failures. In my point of view, this statement makes sense and people should focus their lives more on the optimism rather than on the success.
It is more important for one to always stay optimistic about the world than achieving success because optimism gives one unstoppable spirits to achieve success. Compared with being success, chances of experiencing failures are much higher. If one cannot deal with failures with optimism, they would lose spirits to chase for success and thus give up themselves, who would further doubt their own ability and strength. But if they cope with failures with an optimistic spirit, a spirit that shows they can never be beaten by any trouble which occurs, they will not lose confidence of themselves and continues to pursuit the success, to fight with the failure again and again, until the achieve the ultimate success. The power brought by optimism is unprecedented and overwhelming - it can create something beautiful that one might have not imagined ever before. Take myself as an example. I finally fulfilled my dream of creating a chat bot for people with hearing disabilities after experiencing years of failures and critic voices from other people. Without being optimistic, I can never do that.
Being optimistic also ensures more success after a person already achieved one. People who are pessimistic tend to get comfortable with what they have. So once these people achieved success, they are likely to be satisfied with themselves and stop striving for another success, simply to avoid the potential failure. They try to stay within their comfort zone which provides them a sense of security. However, in this way, they will miss a lot more opportunities to get success, because they are not optimistic enough to believe they deserve one. This is also why so many successful people are often optimists - they always believe in themselves and never stop for chasing after success throughout their lives.
In a nutshell, it is concluded that being happy and optimistic is more important than achieving success for two reasons: optimism gives us energy and ensures us more chances to achieve success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...essful is not of the most importance in ones life; instead, it is rather more crucia...
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Line 3, column 682, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...with the failure again and again, until the achieve the ultimate success. The power brought...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12928759894 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60103530193 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527704485488 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5204786748 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.352941176 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192244355705 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727938379848 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626641907728 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146093126536 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346967284309 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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