An airport map’s redevelopment in the next year
The map depicts the renovation of Southwest airport in the following year.
Overall, despite the expansion of the airport, departures and arrivals will remain in the same locations, and facilities will be installed to enhance efficiency for passengers departing and arriving.
In the first map, the airport currently consists of 2 main areas: departures and arrivals. Upon entering the departures on the left of the map, security and passport control can be seen right ahead with a check-in counter and a cafe before it. Presently, passport control and customs are the only services available in the arrivals hall, which is located on the right, next to the departures.
After redevelopment, a bag drop will be added in the departure hall where the check-in counter was set. In addition, the check-in counter will be relocated adjacent to that and the cafe will be moved right to the left of the entrance. Following security, passengers will see some shops which the current airport does not have. Moving ahead, an expansion is planned and the gates are expected to increase drastically in number, from 8 gates to 18 gates rearranged in the shape of a Y letter. In the lower body of the Y section, a sky train is planned to be erected, replacing the current walkway. Going forward, the arrivals area is also set to be extended, making room for a new car hire agency which is convenient for arriving passengers. Moreover, another cafe and an ATM will be introduced, as well.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
... are the only services available in the arrivals hall, which is located on the right, ne...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 616, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
...the current walkway. Going forward, the arrivals area is also set to be extended, making...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.964 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76523850689 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.011661362 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.416666667 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155603816919 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668594350304 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837083975917 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134581236556 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104140062729 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
... are the only services available in the arrivals hall, which is located on the right, ne...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 616, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
...the current walkway. Going forward, the arrivals area is also set to be extended, making...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.964 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76523850689 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.011661362 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.416666667 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155603816919 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668594350304 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837083975917 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134581236556 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104140062729 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.