Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
With the development of technology, music from somewhere can be popularized and become trending globally in today's world. It is contended that humans from separate regions, cultures and age groups can be connected by music. From my perspective, I partly agree with this opinion.
Music is not only a vast field, but it is also a common hobby of the public. Therefore, it has become a link between many strangers in a unit. Fandom - a group of people who share the love and admiration for the same celebrity can be considered a typical example. They have an overwhelming number of events related to their community, namely concerts and anniversary occasions. Many large-scale music festivals are held, attracting many visitors and creating numerous unforgettable memories for participants. A good case in point is the Coachella music festival.
On the other hand, each person has a different taste in music based on personality. To illustrate, in an extended family, the elder prefers popular music from previous decades, while the young generations tend to listen to pop and electronic music. It is impossible to please every age at the same moment. Besides, a famous star owns both fans and anti-fans and conflicts between the two sides often happen sharply, especially on social networks.
In summary, although one person has their music style, it is still an element that closely unites humans together. Thanks to music, humanity easily expresses their emotions, thereby enriching communication forms and achieving empathy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, therefore, while, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29918032787 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8870562362 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676229508197 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1758948636 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163099765178 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524321451347 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458052184382 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877494905073 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044486124711 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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