Task 2: Social and modern trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to make the living more colorful, especially online. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should live in what we are having and feel comfortable.
To what extent do you agree with these statement?
Nowadays, Social media users often create trends to develop the entertainment industry and bring joy to the young generation. Some people believe that trends exist only to entertain online communities and that people should feel good about what they own. In my perspective, I strongly agree with the above opinion.
On the one hand, trends are created by celebrities for the social community to follow. For example, celebrities upload videos of themselves singing a song or doing some weird act to create trends for their fans to follow or some teenagers doing some risky thing to create a huge impact on the community. Thus, gaining a trinormous amount of follower and making an large impact on social platforms are the real reason that encourages people to continue creating trends.
On the other hand, according to scientists, the a large percentage people live in industry 4.0 have spent half of their day watching and creating videos and trends. This is a waste when people can use those online time to study and work. Moreover, the majority of successful people, instead of spending time online, they spend it learning and improving their knowledge. Therefore, keeping an eye on their daily lives and paying more attention to the real world are the factors that really make life more comfortable.
In conclusion, young teenagers and other individuals should pay more attention to their real life also reduce the time they spend on social platforms and creating trends. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10288065844 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58272172166 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.566228922 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.727272727 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237587931841 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875005741768 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671607092262 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134196901982 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413716873458 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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