Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Considering the recent spikes in human populations, consequently the ferocious growth of
consumption around the globe, and also new approaches in running businesses, local stores
are eradicating rapidly and getting replaced by huge supermarkets. Although these futuristic
methods are beneficial for the revenue of franchisers, their influence might destroy both local
markets and their values.
Looking at the economical components, supermarkets are offering the consumers a wide range of products with quite lower prices which implies that people have a high tendency to purchase goods from the markets with dozens of options for both quality and price. Thus, there will be no one left to support local markets. Additionally, people who are now adopted to this new style can’t possibly succumb to their traditional businesses.
Focusing on the labor market, mentioned supermarkets will create a sheer number of effortless and easy to handle job vacancies. As a consequence, the young who are seeking for a high-paying occupation would find it reasonable to accomplish their needs by working in a supermarket rather than local businesses. Eventually, as the time passes most people who earn a wage from small businesses will not be able to find someone in order to transfer their
techniques and knowledge.
To conclude, adequate customers and employees are the vital parts of any business, meaning that without them even the local businesses with potent cultural values couldn’t stand against the multinational companies. Furthermore, after several years there might be no one left to follow the preceding notions and beliefs and the local communities may vanish sooner or later.
- Writing task 1
- The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one l 56
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world Do you think this is a positive or negative development 47
- Some people argue that it is natural talents make a sportsman famous Others believe that it is hard work Discuss both of views with your opinion 73
- Some people argue that it is natural talents makes a sportsman famous Other believe that it is hard work Discuss both the view with your opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, look, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52692307692 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96692566961 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665384615385 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4657164499 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.7 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156112254531 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587482344585 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243547668291 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047827902518 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420839545918 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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