There are an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbours. What causes this situation? How to solve it?
Following the development of techonology, the bond between human is growing fader and it has generated a number of people who do not know their neighbours. As a matter of fact, kids or even adults are easily attracted by the amusement due to the electronics which are present in daily living of every single person. In this essay, the causes along with the solutions to this situation will be discussed further.
First and foremost, the world is obviously not a safe place, instead, it poses many threats, especially for vulnerable individuals in the society, for examples, children or women. As a consequence, parents tend to keep their kids indoor and would not risk to let them out alone. Moreover, adults in the modern age are often busy since the community’s requirement of work time is a lot, therefore, there is less time for parents to look after their children when they are outside. With the modern electronics, people’s attention is often being drawn away, keeping them addicted to amusements like games or social media platforms. Consequently, social time among human reduce and they know less about their neighbourhoods.
However, there are always solutions to such problems and help community to strengthen the relationship within. Firstly, parents ought to encourage their children to attend activities which are in the neighbourhood. This will significantly build a strong relationship with other neighbour. Secondly, both adults and youngsters should definitely reduce their time on screen to minimum. Combining all the methods above, it would bring positive effects on getting to know your neighbourhood.
In conclusion, getting to know your surrounding neighbours could bring countless advantages, because of that, people ought to spend more time for interaction with their neighbours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risk letting'.
Suggestion: risk letting
...to keep their kids indoor and would not risk to let them out alone. Moreover, adults in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3649122807 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97454885737 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7024648389 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.214285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208465733571 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066404012819 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677295611269 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131808205523 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678576563046 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.