"There are some advantages and disadvantages of the cinema"
Do you agree with this statement?
It is believed that cinema has both merits and demerits. I vehemently agree with this argument, and my rationale behind my viewpoint will be divulged in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, it is indisputable that cinema may make great inroads in people’s moods. That is because after a long week of working and being under a lot of pressure, people can make use of their weekends to go to the cinema for relaxation. Another feasible explanation is that people are enabled to strike up new friendships. For instance, evidence from recent research in Britain suggests that approximately 600 British students have more friends by virtue of paying a visit to the cinema on weekends; hence, there are several benefits of the cinema.
Secondly, it is an undeniable fact that watching unsuitable movies in the cinema may take a heavy toll on people’s mental health. As a result, they will isolate themselves from society and increase depression. Another justification worth mentioning is that it is a waste of money to go to the cinema. By way of illustration, according to a survey carried out by Queen’s University, an Australian student pay about 200 dollars on average per year on account of purchasing cinema tickets and commuting. Through this lens, it is understandable why cinema can be disadvantageous.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that cinema has both positive and injurious effects, which is more logic-based according to the above assumptions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09643956543 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628099173554 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1352408006 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155260846113 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553295136536 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386945666562 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093211571119 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448185266648 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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