In many countries today, if people want to find a job, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In some countries, especially the less developed areas, people tend to relocate to other places to look for jobs. This trend has both benefits and challenges which will be elaborated below.
There are some benefits associated with moving away from people's loved ones.
First, it would be easier for people to search for jobs when they decide to move away from their families and friends. This stems from the facts that when people decide to leave their hometown, it is often the lack of employment opportunities at their living places that encourages them to do so. By seeking work in areas where jobs abound and labor market is less competitive, job seekers would stand a higher chance of being recruited. Addtionally, living away from one's familiar places helps people become self-independent. As individuals live alone, they have to learn how to cook, clean their accommodations, and take care of themselves which makes them less dependent on others. Finally, adopting of new culture, norms, and traditions from other regions or countries provides new inhabitants with broader views of life which make them more well-rounded persons. Thus, given many benefits for individuals, the trend of domestical and international migration is the norm these days.
Apart from advantages, there are also pitfalls relating inhabitating in a different areas namely loss of meaningful relationships and work life balance. The first drawback is that people living alone may experience inadequate social interactions. After landing a job, newcomers are surrounded by the local people who preoccupied the workplace and it would be difficult for new staff to fit in the new environment in a short amount of time. That is why some people working far away from their home town may find their life mundane and boring in the beginning. Secondly, it would be hard for strangers to overcome hardships in exotic habitats. For instance, when people suffer illnesses, struggle with pressure at work, or financial issues, it would be rough for them to cope with these problem without the support from their family members or close accquaintances. However, with the advant of technology, the shortage of social life may be fulfilled.
In sum, there are merits and disadvantages while searching for work in other cities or countries. In my opinion, the benefits of this movement would definately overshadow its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23376623377 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84827431162 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8566508348 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.052631579 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2631578947 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261042293086 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772744313186 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722309682091 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132264492246 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768598409003 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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