Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students
Education is required for an individual if he/she wants to succeed in life ,to get a job ,live a happy life he needs to have education. In our country most cases it is not possible because of the financial situation of most parents in our country. If the country were to provide free college and university education every student can become successful in life.
Yes, Governments should offer college and university education free of charge for all students as many of the countries which offers similar criteria seen an exponential growth in the quality of the engineers like Germany. If we want to pursue B. Tech it is free of cost in Germany if we have a visa and we can get ample oppurtunities to pursue our dreams. So, the same thing at-least to a certain standard could be adapted in our country such that we can bring out unique talents lying within a person.
Governments in our country are trying to adapt this in schools and colleges but not in university levels. It is majorly because the cost of high schools and colleges is very much less than that of Universities. Many Government Schools and Colleges are empty because the Government could not provide required information to them to pursue higher studies. It is also difficult in India compared to Germany because the number of children who educate are very much higher than that of Germany, so the Governament could not provide for all. Instead, private institutions are used in this case.
Government should try to create free colleges and universities as they will be helpful and there is a lack of manpower in many places of India where they need educated people.
- Some people claim that you can tell whether a nation is great by looking at the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists Others argue that the surest indicator of a great nation is in fact the general welfare of all its people 83
- People attend college or Universities for many different reasons Why do you think people attend colleges or universities 80
- People attend college or Universities for many different reasons Why do you think people attend colleges or universities 80
- The following appeared in a memo from the owner of a chain of cheese stores located throughout the United States For many years all the stores in our chain have stocked a wide variety of both domestic and imported cheeses Last year however all of the five 78
- Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...idual if he/she wants to succeed in life ,to get a job ,live a happy life he needs...
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Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e wants to succeed in life ,to get a job ,live a happy life he needs to have educa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 284.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78521126761 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64057979888 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531690140845 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4146123271 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 5.21951772744 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376778546763 0.243740707755 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121853427931 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151263172303 0.0758088955206 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218675683455 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060892458096 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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