Write a paragraph about an important event in history. Identify the event, when it happened, why it happened and why it was important, who was involved, and so on. In your concluding sentence, write your opinion regarding this event or the importance of this event.
There are many events that has played a pivotal role in my life until now. However, one of the most indispensable and memorable events is my first date with my husband.
It was the first time in my life spending all nights long with a man. As we met each other in front of a vintage shops in Paris under the background music of Canon, we share a lot in common, especially in our taste in music. It was the reason why at our first date, he invited me to go to a music festivals in London. Though I was not big on live music, this event was a big surprise to me. Due to the fact that live performance always sounds more exciting than a recorded version.
Furthermore, neither I nor my husband is tone-deaf or out of tune, emerging ourself ourselves in classical music was not an actual problem. The more I appreciated him, the more I was in love with him and admired his musical talent. He could play instruments by ear although he knew how to read music.
Admittedly, none of us was adoring fans of pop groups. We did not care about their huge following, let alone their massive hits. Therefore, if it comes to our favorite pieces of music, it must be slow numbers with very catchy tunes that we can sing along to easily, especially those in our favorite films.
Eventually, in all honesty, this occasion was of paramount importance for me. Considering that this remarked the key milestone in my single life and made me realise that how much I need his love in my own life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 275.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37818181818 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48476747835 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8414823004 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2666666667 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146057030262 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533195435682 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056831490865 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775076524545 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346901537622 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 275.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37818181818 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48476747835 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8414823004 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2666666667 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146057030262 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533195435682 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056831490865 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775076524545 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346901537622 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.