No one can possibly achieve success in the world by conforming to conventional practices and conventional ways of thinking.
History is written by people who are exceptional in their timeline. No ordinary person could ever make a place in the revolutions that happened in the past. The prompt recommends that typical thoughts and activities cannot make a person successful but anomalies can. I strongly agree with the suggestion and argue that ordinary course of events may not result in any good .
A simple man acts the way the society tells him to do. But the society will never change if none of the members try to change it. For example, there are many countries who were severely oppressed by other powerful countries. For years, it had been this way and no one could protest against the authority. But they had some great leaders who stood up against all the tyranny and eventually their vision led the country to achieving freedom. If not they went against the norms, they could never fred the people and thus never achieve success. So history itself is the proof that people who obeyed established customs all along are not the one who created revolution, it is the one who thought out of the box.
The world is changing too fast nowadays due to many revolutionary discoveries one after one. To keep pace with the constantly changing trend and to be the next person to bring the change, one has to think far. It is the era where the world is being led by the people who think big. It is almost impossible to gain prosperity without being the exception as the competition is too high to imagine. One has to constantly prove his worth in order to validate himself. For instance, job recruiters nowadays interview thousands of people for just one position and being an ordinary candidate cannot help someone to get the job. The probability is high to get the job when the recruiters find something different in a candidate. So it is evident that just meeting the requirements is not enough for today’s competitive world.
Of course, some argue that everyone doesn’t need to be special and it can create mental pressure on a person. However, there is always some pain that has to be endured in order to gain success. Success doesn’t come easily. One has to work for it and this is because not everyone gets it anyway. So, being a just regular person, no one should expect to achieve something great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, if, may, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71144278607 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5232303702 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532338308458 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8310054958 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.9166666667 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179783824042 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497682390845 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396078404192 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103114898167 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253815092691 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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