Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Undoubtedly, all of us live just for once and it is very important that we choose the best place for living. Someones want to live in one city or town all their lives, however other people prefer to live in different places and move from one place to another. I am strongly on the side of people who think that living in diverse cities is better. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, although moving from one home to another home in a different city is not easy, the benefits of this movement are more than its difficulties. To be more specific, when we live in different places we experience amazing new situations and learn much valuable information. Actually, we can work in various firms and educate in different universities. For example, since I love to have the experience of living on every continent, I decided to study at an Asian university for two semesters. When I was there, I learned a lot of information about their educational system and their special cultures. If I had not lived there, I would not have gained such instructive experiences.
Furthermore, living in different places gives us an opportunity for finding more friends. Actually, if we live in one place, we can not make our friendship extend. However, in different cities, we will familiar with new colleagues and classmates and these new relationships can be very beneficial for us. For instance, last year, when I moved to China, I found my best friends. Actually, I have many other friends from different countries because I have lived in different cities in my life and now I am so happy for finding them.
To recap, I surely prefer to live in different cities and I move from one place to another every several years. This is because not only does living in various cities provide us with many opportunities for jobs and learning, but it also makes us many extensive friendships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72485207101 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75724565959 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523668639053 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2608181967 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9411764706 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268527836151 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938252577282 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984848450943 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191910625547 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662839490817 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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