Summarize the points made in the lecture, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading passage.
Pluto, the dwarf planet, once held the status of a planet in our solar system.But International Astronomical Union downgraded the status of Pluto to that of a dwarf planet because it did not meet the criteria of a full-sized planet.
Pluto meets all the criteria except it has not cleared its neighbourhood around its orbit.But this is a matter of controversy.since many planets including Earth do not do so.But according to the new definition for planets introduced by Astronomical Union,pluto lost its planetary title.
At first, it was thought thatpluto was deported due to its size,Therfore there arises an argument that there are many planetary objects which is larger than Pluto,yet not given the title. so many of the astronomical community strongly opposed the move. but it was found later that it is not the real reason behind the new classification.
It is considered saddening since the astronomy community did not get a fair opportunity to oppose this depromotion and many disagreed with the decision.so it disappoints the pluto lovers and forced them to accept the fact. but still, pluto holds a place in everyone's heart.
Since science is in constant progression and development,new and new rediscoveries and corrections are natural.it is a continuously evolving area. Even though the present generation disagreeswith the new classification,the future generation won't be get affected,they will grow up knowing only there are only 8 planets in the solar system.they won't be really worried about pluto or its past title.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 245.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28163265306 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29550828307 2.5805825403 128% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9843405704 49.2860985944 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.777777778 110.228320801 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2222222222 21.698381199 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.01221816616 0.272083759551 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00427139252372 0.0996497079465 4% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0120813224745 0.0662205650399 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00622903846837 0.162205337803 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124580769367 0.0443174109184 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.3589403974 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.8541721854 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.42419426049 114% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.7273730684 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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