Nowadays people depend on technology for leisure activities. Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, It is common that people are deploying technology for entertaining in their leisure time. In my opinion, even though there are certain benefits associated with using modern technology for recreational activities, the drawbacks from this trend would overshadow its merits.
It is thought that the deployment of technology and users' health deterioration have a close correlation. Firstly, excessive exposure to the screen of technical instruments is the precursor of eye-related illnesses. Likewise, game, which is a popular form of etertaining activities is believed to cause addiction among its users. This is especially the case for the young game players, who have the tendency to spend many hours a day playing games.
Another negative impact of using technological inventions for leisure activities is that it is the main culprit of sedentary lifestyle, which links directly to many mental and physical health issues among people. One of the drawbacks of the way of life is that people may feel socially-isolated, thereby being afraid to establish and maintain relationships with others, which in turn have negative impact on people's social lives.
Admittedly, utilization of technologycal equipment and software for entertainment offers their players and audience with various options, captivating design, and interesting functions. However, these features are aimed for remain users longer on these platforms, which in the long time exacurbates the effects on people's well-being.
In sum, many health problems can be attributable to the use of technology for entertaining purpose, albeit the activities provide people with certain merits related to users' experience. I believe that this phenomenon is a negative movement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, may, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72030651341 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14518550091 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2028115728 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.416666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289951158929 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102702871529 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669186011062 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161914852024 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620231855015 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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