Students today can access information online,do libraries are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable to state that use of internet is proliferated to access data for education. In this contemporary era, pupils can get knowledge online, thus libraries are unnecessary. I agree with this statement to a large extent as it is not a time consuming process and it is a convenient way to attain information.
Ti initiate with, we can save environment by using less paper. To elaborate it, when they will increase their knowledge online, there is no need to publish books or articles owing to which plants will not cut to produce paper. To consequently, humans can save trees which are essential to survive human beings. In addition to this, learners can save their quality time. Most students wants to save their time because they can use this time for other purpose.
Moving further, mentees prefer to access material in updated version. In other words, it gives updated details to tutees. As they wants information that is upgraded, they use online sites to recieve new facts related to education or research. To epitome, in the world, software engineering students gets updated information from internet to develop new browsers. So, why not students can attain information online if is a convenient way to enhance their knowledge.
However, I may not overlook the other side too, Libraries provide quite ambience to kids. To explicate it, if they want do focus on their study, they visit to library owing to which they can concentrate on their education. To exemplify, most University learners claim that they can get concentration in university library. What is more, it incline financial burden on parents. Since childhood prefer to access information online, it is possible by recharge with money to access internet. Consequently, it is not possible for poor people to access data online.
To conclude, undoubtedly, digital libraries are more eminent among students to enhance knowledge. Although traditional libraries provide peaceful environment, yet pupils can save their quality time by assessing materials online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ti) must be used with a third-person verb: 'initiates'.
Suggestion: initiates
...nvenient way to attain information. Ti initiate with, we can save environment by using ...
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Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...ives updated details to tutees. As they wants information that is upgraded, they use ...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 341, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'inclines'?
Suggestion: inclines
...in university library. What is more, it incline financial burden on parents. Since chil...
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Line 6, column 403, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en on parents. Since childhood prefer to access information online, it is possibl...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, may, so, thus, in addition, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85391910422 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539634146341 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1377991253 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.619047619 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220176237208 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606235725652 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363094955737 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11959242615 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370532137658 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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