Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in foreign country.
Owing to the fact that in developing world, iindividuals are facing certain difficulties to manage their livelihood.Therefore young generation of these 3rd world areas are moving to progressive foreign countries for experiencing a better lifestyle.
But there are pros and cons of migrating to a foreign country.
Settling in a foreign country is not a piece of cake. For instance, the language barrier always make it challenging for you to live in a foreign country.If you do not know the language of respective country you would might get in serious troubles
An ample evidence suggests that about 60% of total migrants that comes from struggling nations do not even know the ABC of migrated countries language
Contrary to that, there are several benefits that you can enjoy while in a foreign country.
For example, you can enjoy a luxurious life by getting handsome salary every month.in addition, you would be able to get extraordinary health and education services.
A survey conducted by a global organization stated that about 95% of develop nations individuals have approach to basic health facilities while in struggling nations it is decline to merely 45%
To summarize,I believe that the pros of living in a foreign country overweigh the cons.Individuals could have a astonishing experience by living in a foreign country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26046511628 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12921991983 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576744186047 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.631472874 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.5 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8333333333 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206947739961 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116147817949 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707202448982 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971571685363 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994730875522 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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