some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money
Nowadays, it is believed that some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money, in this essay I would examine the reason of how happines is related to wealth and how other circumstance are also crucial to be happy before coming to reasonable conclusion.
In the one hand, there are some reason of a lot of cash usually make people feel better in their lives, firstly, a wealthy person who has extremly money easier spend their wealth, it is because rich person can purchase anything which is their like, for example when they want to bought bag from branded brand which is expensive, they can booked and check out with easy, in this way make wealthy people can feel enjoy in their lives when they can get anything which are they want. Secondly it could get better medical facilities when their family gett sick, it is due to they can decided to register and visited famous hospital with their wealthy, for example when their parents get disease people can bring they to expensive clinic directly and with good treatment, as results make their live can be save everytime especially when illnes.
However there are other factors which are also responsible to be a delight that is love, it is because fund could not purchase love and care. Take as on example when rich people don’t have familiy or closed ones to take care and share love with good relationship, for instance make their live flat and bored while they have much fund.
Tom sum up from where I stand, It is true that money can provides lavish lifestyle however love, care and good relationship can comes bring gratification.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'book'
Suggestion: book
...nded brand which is expensive, they can booked and check out with easy, in this way ma...
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Line 2, column 579, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'decide'
Suggestion: decide
...family gett sick, it is due to they can decided to register and visited famous hospital...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ave everytime especially when illnes. However there are other factors which are also ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...here I stand, It is true that money can provides lavish lifestyle however love, care and...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...er love, care and good relationship can comes bring gratification.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64111498258 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27397768615 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.652047917 49.4020404114 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.0 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.8333333333 20.7667163134 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.8333333333 7.06120827912 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230711635539 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12927051192 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162440800238 0.0667982634062 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172729610512 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18349810923 0.056905535591 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.52 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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