Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility
Following the development of technology, environmental problems occur in a bunch of country around the world and it has become one of the most popular topics nowadays. As a matter of fact, environment has a significant effect on human’s health, therefore, preserving it as well as stopping the cause of pollution is being concerned carefully by many people. Further in this essay, I will discuss about the root of the complication along with the possible solution to address such scenario.
First and foremost, it is obvious that the population is booming with a quick rate of speed, because of that, it leads to an increase in transportation or factories. Accordingly, with the rise of machines, it comes with emission and more consumption of energy. Consequently, the demands for factories and other types of facilities would mean cutting down trees to make space for the construction, the ecology is likely to be damaged severely. Moreover, if trees are gone and exhaust from factories and vehicles is produced more, air pollution will get even worse than it is currently available.
Undoubtedly, environmental issues are also caused the lack of self-consciousness of each person. As easily seen in the society, there is a great amount of people who pay no attention to the sake of the environment, resultingly, they give themselves the privilege to do whatever they want, including polluting the earth. As a counter measure, government should apply and enforce stronger punishment to environment-damaging action like littering or illegally destroying nature. In addition, not only should government execute new laws to protect mother nature, but they should also educate the citizens more about protecting the surroundings.
In conclusion, since the problem can escalate unexpectedly, stopping the factors that damage the environment is extremely crucial as it would give a better living condition and create a better future for all humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ing concerned carefully by many people. Further in this essay, I will discuss about the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34415584416 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22269659099 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652597402597 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6950326987 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.166666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212318084482 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586940862972 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586841434812 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110525638766 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495969891786 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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