Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We can distinguish a country’s culture by perceiving its art. On contrary, a state-sponsored Olympic team represents its country in front of the whole world. Though both are crucial, I am on the side that government should spend more money on state Olympic teams. My point of view will be described in the subsequent paragraphs.
The first thing that comes to my mind is the Olympics athletes represent our country internationally. They should be well-trained up so that, they won gold medals or others. Most of the athletes in my country belong to average financial conditions. They cannot afford any neoteric training course to cope with other players in the Olympic game. This section needs government attention. If government arrange state-organized training program, they can improve their skill. Although, art is also required. They don’t need any financial support to represent the globe. In this modern era, with the assistance of the internet, it has become easier to publish anything worldwide.
Besides, we can assume the huge expense behind those training programs needed for the athletes. However, if the government invests money in events like the Olympics, it can be said that the nation will also profit from those events. If we can assure a well-organized training program, we can also assure our victory in front of the whole world. It will expand our country’s popularity globally. We can make good relationships with other countries in this way as well as can increase our import-export business with them. Through arts, these facilities will be hard to develop.
Additionally, this project will also abate some national problems like unemployment. Unemployment has become a curse for our country. If the government does not spend money on state Olympic teams, those members will become unemployed. Besides that, it will increase poverty in our country. For instance, one of my friends used to belong to a national boxing team. His dream was always to be an international champion but he did not get any national attention. That’s why he did not have any choice but to leave his dream to support his family. He is unemployed now and struggling a lot to find a suitable job for him. If he got the chance to show his talent on any international stage like the Olympics, he will not end up in such a miserable condition.
Finally, it is clear from the above-mentioned description that the government should spend more money on athletics like state-sponsored Olympic teams to build the team stronger to face other countries as well as it will bring some financial help to the country.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 83
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic teams Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic teams Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... program, they can improve their skill. Although, art is also required. They don’t need ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07175925926 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96062461984 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9688463814 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5517241379 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8965517241 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86206896552 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18217137075 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468282997713 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560250419867 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121933614055 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621576620302 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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