The given line graph depicts the rate of visitors in Scotland who had a trip to 4 types of attractions between 1980 and 2010
The given line graph depicts the rate of visitors in Scotland who had a trip to 4 types of attractions between 1980 and 2010
What stand out from the graph is that there were two opposite trends for these 4 figures. While the number of people coming to zoo and castle witnessed a progress, tourist who visited aquarium and castle reducing over the same period.
Starting at a quite high point, the percentage of people who come to castle reached a peak at 45 % after climbing significantly from 1980 to 1995.Over the next 5 years, this figure went down instead of rising and then it remained unchanged to the end of the period. The proportion of who visiting festival compared with that of castle is much lower at the beginning of the period, only one third of the castle. It started fluctuating from 1980 to 2000 and then it increased moderately to hit the peak at 20% in 2010.
Turning into the downward trend of the other two , although the rate of the Scotland visitors coming to festival had the highest starting point , it declined generally and stopped at around 17% during the mentioned period. There are a remarkable rise in the number of tourists visiting aquarium before decreasing sharply and it became the lowest point of all the categories in the last year of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Over
...limbing significantly from 1980 to 1995.Over the next 5 years, this figure went down...
^^^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...he end of the period. The proportion of who visiting festival compared with that of...
^^^
Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...into the downward trend of the other two , although the rate of the Scotland visit...
^^
Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... festival had the highest starting point , it declined generally and stopped at ar...
^^
Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'rises'?
Suggestion: rises
...entioned period. There are a remarkable rise in the number of tourists visiting aqua...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67400881057 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49354933374 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57268722467 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2608375798 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.571428571 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4285714286 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298909698271 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137251175466 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.214363607466 0.0843802449381 254% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301983029453 0.15604864568 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.403202514737 0.0819641961636 492% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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